Final Paper: Unit Four

Marli Overgard

RWS200

Prof. Werry

05/11/2016

Everything’s Sweeter in Moderation and a Little Regulation:

The Problems Linked to Online Anonymity

            Be careful of trolls lurking in the darkest corners of the internet. Trolls are vile creatures whose sole purpose on the internet are to cause uproar and create havoc through inappropriate commenting and online harassment that can be targeted at an individual or group of people. The trail of hateful discourse trolls leave behind as they lurk the internet fill comment sections, social media, and blogs across the cyber-world. One example of a victim of trolling is Zelda Williams, daughter of Robin Williams who was sent photoshopped pictures of her father’s dead body over social media (Ruiz). One can only image the emotional damage that heinous act caused for a daughter whom just lost her father. What is causing trolling and uncivil behavior online, and how can it be erased? There is indeed a link between uncivility and anonymity. Alan Martin, author of “Online Disinhibition Effect and the Psychology of Trolling,” addresses the link between hateful discourse and anonymity on the internet by stating, “Common wisdom dictates that people are more aggressive, rude and forthright online because they’re anonymous and can act as unpleasantly as they like without immediate consequence” (Martin). Anonymity leads users to believe they are invincible and that their actions and words could never be linked back to them. The way anonymity is structured currently is a problem that needs to be addressed, because it leads to trolling and uncivil behavior. Ultimately, if anonymity can be changed for the better, than trolling and uncivil discourse could be lessened too. The three concrete solutions for bettering anonymity on the internet are keeping it the way it is, regulating/moderating it, or erasing anonymity as a whole. But solving the problems that transpire from anonymity is not as easy as picking one of these three options. In this essay I will look at what has been said in regards to the current problems with online anonymity. Then, I will argue my claim that trolling and uncivil behavior would be lessened if online anonymity was moderated and used in appropriate situations, and regulated with stricter laws that imposed greater consequences for online harassment.

Before it can be argued that moderating and regulating anonymity would help diminish trolling, there needs to be a clear idea on what trolling is and how it is linked to anonymity. Trolls are internet users that comment incendiary and inappropriate things online to provoke reaction from other internet users. An example of a troll is “Obnoxious,” who was a sixteen-year-old boy that found pleasure in harming girls emotionally, mentally, and sometimes physically. Obnoxious was the troll’s pseudonym and he is known as one of the most dangerous trolls in the history of the internet. Before he was arrested and sentenced to juvenile detention, Obnoxious would force girls to send naked photographs over chatrooms and Skype. If the women refused, he would threaten to burn down their house, SWAT them, and even inflict pain on their families (Reynolds). According to Steven Tweedie an author for Business Insider, swatting is when “cybercriminals call in a serious crime – such as a hostage situation or shooter on the loose – in the hopes of unleashing a SWAT team on an unsuspecting person” (Tweedie). Obnoxious didn’t stop at swatting, he reeked havoc all across the internet and found pleasure in hurting as many women internet users as possible. The infamous troll put countless girls in danger for emotional and physical distress (Reynolds). Obnoxious is just one example out of thousands of trolls that prove there needs to be a way to undermine the trolling subculture. To do so, the way anonymity is set up currently must be altered. Anonymity and trolling are clearing linked due to the “Online Disinhibition Effect,” that was created by psychologist John Suler. Suller states the six factors that change a person’s behavior online including “dissociative anonymity.” Dissociative anonymity means that online users feel like their actions taken online cannot be linked back to them as a person (Suler). This effect clearly shows why online anonymity must be changed, because the way it is currently is giving trolls the mentality that they can easily cause mayhem and hurt online users without consequence.

The debate on what to do with online anonymity has three concrete categories which include; eliminating anonymity as a whole, regulating/moderating anonymity, or keep anonymity the way it is currently. There are three people that support these three distinct categories with their arguments. Andrew Stafford, author of “Who are these haters that poison the well of discourse,” claims that if anonymity was eliminated, the internet would have less uncivil and trolling behavior. To backup his claim Stafford states anonymity “just allows people to indulge in their worst tendencies, not only towards individuals but entire social groups” (Stafford). The person that represents the argument of regulating/moderating anonymity is Clive Thompson, author of “Smarter Than You Think,” who claims that if comment sections on blogs were moderated there would be more intelligent conversations occurring online rather than uncivil behavior. Clive Thompson supports his claim by using a specific example on how moderating comment sections have been successful in decreasing trolling (this example will be looked at further into the essay). The last stance of the online anonymity debate argues that online anonymity is important and must be kept the way it is. Dana Boyd, author of “Real Names’ Policies are an Abuse of Power,” argues that anonymity online is needed for safety reasons. She supports her claim by stating, “many people are LESS safe when they are identifiable. And those who are least safe are often those who are most vulnerable” (Boyd). Each of the three arguments have their strengths and weaknesses, which is why I believe finding a solution to online anonymity cannot be as broadly stated as eliminating, regulating, or keeping it the way it is. In the next portion of the paper I will argue my reasoning on why moderating anonymity in certain parts of the internet is important, while increasing laws for regulation will help lessen trolling and uncivil behavior.

Anonymity cannot be fully erased, because it is important that we keep it in certain parts of the internet for the security rights of users. Fully erasing anonymity is implausible, because the internet is such a complex system. Trolls will always find a way to be anonymous no matter how intricate and secure the system gets. Bruce Schneier, author of “The Internet: Anonymous Forever” states, “Any design of the Internet must allow for anonymity. Universal identification is impossible. Even attribution–knowing who is responsible for particular Internet packets–is impossible. Attempting to build such a system is futile, and will only give criminals and hackers new ways to hide” (Schneier). Schneier is arguing that the government could try and erase anonymity, but it is not plausible nor will it get us the results that are wanted. If we want to lower incivility and trolling online, making every user use their real names for everything is not going to be effective. There are some cases where people need to stay anonymous for safety reasons and protection of their beliefs. For example, a woman who is a sexual assault victim may feel more comfortable sharing her story online and asking for help if she can stay anonymous. Or a man who has been stalked may not be able to interact online safely without a pseudonym. There are countless examples on how erasing anonymity impairs users and takes away their necessary privacy online. To be invisible to the scrutinizing eye of the online community lets minorities have a voice that they might not have in real life. Erasing anonymity fully will not result in the most benefits, because as trolls are being silenced, so are the voices of many people who deserve to be heard.

Moderating anonymity would be the best option because it could lessen uncivil behavior, while keeping the right to anonymity for beneficial use. One way moderating anonymity has already been implemented is the abolishment of comment sections on certain websites. For example, Maria Konnika, author of “The Psychology of Online Comments” explains that Popular Science disallowed visitors to comment on their articles, because the sections became a mockery of the intellectual pieces. The anonymous uncivil comments only lead to polarizing views of the articles and made the website seem incredible. There was no point in having anonymous commenting on the website, because no intellectual conversation was occurring. By taking away the ability to comment, the website became more about the research and scientific information and less about the hateful discourse that occurred for no reason. It can be argued that comment sections can be a great place for expanded discussion and intriguing debates, but only if they are controlled correctly. It is important that the people commenting have their identities protected and that is why anonymity is critical, but that also leads to an easy platform for trolling. A good way to moderate anonymity can be exemplified by Ta-Nahesi Coates, a man who moderated the comment sections on his blogs by blocking trolls and creating a community of avid commenters that expand discussion regarding his posts (Thompson). Although the platform for Coates’ blog is considered relatively small, the framework of this kind of moderation could be transferred to bigger platforms if websites really wanted to. A company that has been striving for the solution of moderating anonymity online is CrowdSource. CrowdSource uses contracted and trained workers to monitor the quality, appropriateness, and relevance of content being posted on websites (Ruiz). Usually more that one worker will look at a piece of content for a client and decided whether or not to publish it, which helps prevent personal bias. CrowdSource has been proven to help websites such as Overstock, Klip, and Staples. CrowdSource was also used for debate.org and has lessened the amount of obscene, racist, and despicable comments (Ruiz). If more websites implemented solutions to moderate their comment sections, the internet could be less about awful content, and more about expanding discussion. By moderating comment sections, trolls will have a harder time posting their atrocious content while other users will be able to keep their right to anonymity.

The majority of trolling is as simple as obscene and disgusting words being said in comment threads online, but what happens when trolling turns life-threatening? As I previously exemplified through the use of the example Obnoxious the troll, trolling does not always stop at racist and sexist jokes. Trolling can lead to victimizing other internet users and forcing them to send naked photographs, threatening them and their families, and the leaving the victims in emotional distress. The problem with extreme trolling is the troll feels invincible. When they are controlling a child to send naked photographs, they do not think of the consequences of child pornography; the troll just feeds off the immediate pleasure. Regulation of trolling needs to be stricter so that trolls do not feel invincible to to the criminal system. There are already laws in place that illegalize cyberbullying and harassment online, but I believe that laws need to be enforced more effectively so that innocent people are not being put into emotional, mental, and physical distress. Marlisse Sweeney, author of “What the Law Can (and Can’t) Do About Online Harassment,” states, “right now, there are a handful of ways victims can address their attacker through the legal system, both civilly and criminally. Unfortunately, many of them are costly invasive, and combined with a lack of education and precedent, these channels don’t always offer the justice people are seeking” (Sweeney). Sweeney is stating that although there are already laws in place, they are not strict nor simplified enough to seek the justice these victims deserve. When fourteen-year-old Hannah Smith posted a photo of herself on Reddit.com, the photo was then followed with comments such as “go die,” “drink bleach,” and “get cancer.” Smith unfortunately was found dead after killing herself by ingesting bleach. The coroner concluded that the vile messages “would all have been at Hannah’s own hand” (Carey). The girl had committed suicide and people were blaming her for her own emotional distress. That is the perception that needs to change about internet incivility. Because it is hard to push blame onto an anonymous commenter, the blame is simply placed on the victim and justice is never served. There needs to be stricter laws that enforce consequences for cruel and offensive behavior online, or else more victims like Smith will fall into a path of self-harm, psychological damage, and even suicide without justice. A common question that may be asked to a victim of trolling would be “why doesn’t he/she go to the police?” Unfortunately, going to the police commonly leads to a dead end for victims of online incivility, because online harassment is seen as a civil matter even though there are laws that label online harassment as a criminal problem. Danielle Citron, a professor at University of Maryland’s Francis King Carey School of Law states that many police do not have the training for crimes such as online harassment, because they are not allocating their resources to fight this type of crime (Sweeney). If trolling and online incivility are going to be decreased, there needs to be people who can advocate for the victims and the police need to be apart of that support system. To diminish online harassment, there needs to be stricter regulation laws and police need to be trained to enforce those laws. It should not take victims a tremendous amount of funds, time, and resources to fight off threatening trolls. Anonymous users who think they are invincible must face the consequences. By regulating anonymity and imposing stricter consequences, we could stop trolls from getting away with their threatening, vile and crude behavior.

Online anonymity is clearly linked to hateful discourse on the internet, but that does not mean eliminating anonymity should be the solution. The internet is a complex system, therefore the way to solve uncivility and trolling is complex too. There is no simple solution that will fully eliminate trolling, but there are steps that can be taken to undermine trolls and their inappropriate and dangerous behavior. If online anonymity was moderated in places such as comment sections and social media, users who deserve to have the right to anonymity would be able to speak their minds, while trolls would be silenced. If there were more laws that imposed greater consequences for online harassment, more trolls would face legal consequences and victims would be granted the justice they deserve. Stricter regulations and consequences would help prevent the “dissociative anonymity” mentality that trolls encompass. The internet can be a welcoming place for expanded discussion, intellectual debate, and growing knowledge; but when trolling, hateful discourse and uncivility take over, the internet can become a dark, threatening, and ominous place.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Works Cited

 

 

 

Boyd, Dana. “Real-Names Are an Abuse of Power.” Communications of the ACM. August 4th,             2011.

 

Carey, Tanith. “Why Teenagers Are ‘self-trolling’ on Websites like Reddit.” The Telegraph. N.p.,         21 Feb. 2016. Web. 8 May 2016.

 

Martin, Alan. “Online Disinhibition and the Psychology of Trolling.” Wired UK. N.p., 30 May            2013. Web. 8 May 2016.

 

Reynolds, Emma. “Obnoxious the Troll and the Deadly Art of “Swatting”” News.com.au. N.p.,           18 Dec. 2015. Web.

 

Ruiz, Rebecca. “When Your Job Is to Moderate the Nastiest of Trolls.” Mashable. N.p., 08 Sept.          2014. Web. 8 May 2016.

 

Schneier, Brian. “The Internet: Anonymous Forever.” Forbes. N.p., 12 May 2010. Web. 8 May           2016.

 

Stafford, Andrew. “Who are these haters that poison the well of our discourse?” The Sydney     Morning Herald. April 12, 2012.

 

Suler, John. “The Online Disinhibition Effect.” CyberPsychology & Behavior 7.3 (2004): 321- 26. Web. 8 May 2016.

 

Sweeney, Marlisee S. “What the Law Can (and Can’t) Do About Online Harassment.” The        Atlantic. Atlantic Media Company, 12 Nov. 2014. Web. 08 May 2016.

 

Thompson, Clive. “Smarter Than You Think.” Penguin Press. 2013. Pp 77-81.

 

Tweedie, Steven. “‘Swatting’ Is a Dangerous New Trend, as Pranksters Call a SWAT Team on an         Unsuspecting Victim While the Internet Watches.” Business Insider. Business Insider,        Inc, 12 Mar. 2015. Web. 08 May 2016.

Final Paper: Unit Four

Rough Rough Draft for Unit 4 Paper

Be careful of trolls lurking in the darkest corners of the internet. A troll is someone who’s sole purpose while on the internet is to cause uproar and create havoc through the use of extraneous comments, and they find pleasure in harrasing other users through words and actions. The hateful discourse that comes from trolling fills comment sections, social media, and blogs all across the cyber world. But what is causing trolling and uncivil behavior, and how can it be erased? There is indeed a link between uncivility and anonymity. Alan Martin, author of “Online Disinhibition Effect and the Psychology of Trolling”, addresses the link between hateful discourse and anonymity on the internet by stating, “Common wisdom dictates that people are more aggressive, rude and forthright online because they’re anonymous and can act as unpleasantly as they like without immediate consequence” (). Anonymity leads to users believing they are invincible, they act like their actions and words could never be linked back to them. Anonymity as it is right now is a problem that needs to be addressed, because it leads to trolling and uncivil behavior. Ultimately, if there is a solution to the problems with current online anonymity, trolling and uncivil discourse could be lessened too. The three solutions to anonymity on the internet is keeping it the way it is, regulating parts of it, or erasing it as a whole. In this essay I will argue why regulating anonymity is the best option in lowering the amount of trolling and uncivil behavior.

Before it can be proved that regulating anonymity would help diminish trolling, there needs to be a clear idea on what trolling is and how it is linked to anonymity. Trolls are internet users that comment incendiary and inappropriate things online. (This paragraph is going to link trolling and uncivil discourse on the internet with anonymity to back up my argument that regulating anonymity would lower the uncivility) …

 

Anonymity cannot be fully erased, because it is important that we keep it in some way to have security and free speech. Fully erasing anonymity is implausible, because the internet is such a complex system. Trolls will always find a way to be anonymous no matter how intricate and secure the system gets. Bruce Schneier, author of “Anonymous Forever” states, “Any design of the Internet must allow for anonymity. Universal identification is impossible. Even attribution–knowing who is responsible for particular Internet packets–is impossible. Attempting to build such a system is futile, and will only give criminals and hackers new ways to hide.”

(). Schneier is arguing that the government could try and erase anonymity, but it is not plausible, nor will it get the results that are wanted. If we want to lower incivility and trolling on the internet, making every user use their real names for everything is not going to be effective. There are some cases where people need to stay anonymous for safety reasons and protection of their beliefs. For example, a woman who is a sexual assault victim may feel more comfortable sharing her story online and asking for help if she can stay anonymous. Or a man who has been stalked may not be able to interact online safely without a pseudonym. There are countless examples on how erasing anonymity fully can impair users and take away their necessary privacy online. To be invisible to the scrutinizing eye of the community online lets minorities have a voice that they might not have in real life. Erasing anonymity fully will not result in the most benefits, because as trolls are being silenced, so are the voices of many people who deserve to be heard.

Regulating anonymity would be the best option because it could lessen uncivil behavior, while keeping the right to anonymity for beneficial use. One way regulating anonymity has already been implemented is the abolishment of comment sections on certain websites. For example, Maria Konnika, author of “The Psychology of Online Comments” describes that Popular Science disallowed visitors to comment on their articles, because the sections became a mockery of the intellectual pieces. The anonymous uncivil comments only lead to polarizing views of the articles and made the website seem incredible There was no point to having anonymous commenting on the website, because it wasn’t providing for any intellectual conversation to occur. By taking away the ability to comment on that site, the website became more about the research and information and less about the hateful discourse that occurred for no reason. It can be argued that comment sections can be a great place for expanded conversation and intriguing debates, but only if they are regulated correctly. It is important that the people commenting feel like their identity is protected and that is why anonymity is important, but that also leads to an easy platform for trolling. A good way to regulate this can be exemplified by Ta-Nahesi Coates, a man who regulated the comment sections on his blogs by blocking trolls and creating a community of avid commenters that expand discussion regarding his posts. Although the platform for Coates’ blog is considered relatively small, the framework of this kind of regulation could be transferred to bigger platforms if people really wanted to. When scrolling around YouTube, a big platform that attracts trolls from all across the world, I noticed that people can turn off comments on the videos they post. …

(This paragraph is going to be about how the law can help regulate anonymity and lessen the trolling behavior on the internet. I will discuss what laws are already out there for trolls and how difficult/easy it is to track down an anonymous user. This paragraph will back up my claim that anonymity does not need to be fully erased, because trolls are traceable. It will also provide an argument on why it is important that anonymous users are traceable to law enforcement due to the problematic outcomes trolls can cause.)

Rough Rough Draft for Unit 4 Paper

Proposal

For my Unit 4 paper, I will be arguing the stance that regulating anonymity on the internet is the best way to lower incivility, while keeping people safe. I will draw in many texts including; “The Debate Over Online Anonymity”, “The Trolls Among Us”, and “Do We Still Need Comments?” I’m also going to use a real life example where anonymity should not have been allowed and why it is important that anonymity is regulated. The real life example is of my friend who dealt with an anonymous predator online. The predator would threaten little children for inappropriate pictures and he would not have been able to get away with it as long as he did if he wasn’t anonymous. That example will help support my claim that anonymity cannot be kept how it is and that it should be regulated. Then I will bring in an example of someone who needed anonymity for safety reasons. In this part I will also use logos to appeal to my audience in a logical way considering my real life example gears more towards a pathos appeal. By using articles and evidence that support why anonymity cannot be totally erased, I will prove that regulating it is what needs to happen. In the end, I will articulate an argument on what kind of regulation would be the most efficient.

Proposal

Homework for Monday April 18th,2016

For my Unit 4 paper I will be focusing on the stance that anonymity should be regulated in some sort of way. I have not yet decided how anonymity should be effectively regulated, but that is when will draw in outside sources to come to a educated conclusion.

 

Do We Still Need Comments?, Newrepulic.com

“To those who are already relentlessly criticized in comments and on social media, Genius’s granular focus can itself feel threatening—as though commenters already have bats, and someone handed them knives.”

This quote is could be used to explain the need for some sort of regulation when it comes to commentary and anonymity. If comment sections are only bringing incivility, then what is the point of having them?

 

The Debate Over Online Anonymity, by Ben Rooney

“If you are looking at reckless individuals who have no accountability or responsibility, who use multiple identities essentially to create chaos, then you are looking at a completely different frame of reference. That has very little to do with the question of the sensible use of pseudonyms.”

This quote sort of focuses on the other side of the argument. It is stating that even thought there are people who abuse the power of anonymity, there are still people who need it and use it sensibly. This text/quote could be used in the counter argument part of my essay so that I can establish credibility with my audience.

 

The Trolls Among Us, Anne Applebaum

“Multiple experiments have shown that perceptions of an article, its writer, or its subject can be profoundly shaped by anonymous online commentary, especially if it is harsh.”

This quote proves that there is something wrong with anonymity. It proves that if we want to lessen uncivil discourse on the internet, then we need to look at the root cause of it which is anonymity.

The whole article will be useful in proving the link between anonymity and trolling. If the audience sees that there is a link, then it can be proven that regulating anonymity may be a good direction to head in. I also could bring in articles that talk about the need for some sort of anonymity, because some people need pseudonyms for safety.

Homework for Monday April 18th,2016

Final Paper #3

Marli Overgard

RWS200

Prof. Werry

04/09/16

The Answers to Anonymity

Over the years the internet has become a breeding ground for vulgarity and bullying. Cyberspace and anonymity have allowed a subculture of internet trolls to be born. Trolls are online users that purposely start arguments and uproar on the internet with extraneous comments and off-putting messages. One example of trollish behavior is after Alexis Pilkington, a seventeen-year-old girl, committed suicide, trolls took over her tribute pages online and filled it with horrendous comments (Zhuo, para 5). The fact is that no one knows who was posting the atrocious comments and references to hangings leads to the concern of anonymity. The debate with trolls and internet bullies aligns with the existence of anonymity on the internet. Since social media has become essential to our culture, it is imperative that we examine the strengths and weaknesses of anonymity. Should the internet provide users the option of anonymity or not?  By looking at three different views of anonymity, it will be more apparent of whether or not anonymity on the internet should exist. The three different stances of anonymity are erase it, regulate it, or keep it how it is. I will analyze each stance by bringing in different texts that support the positions. In the end I will conclude which position has the strongest argument, ideas, and has the more strengths in comparison to weaknesses.

Trolls lurk the internet with the privilege of having no name linked to their hateful discourse. If anonymity was no longer in existence, would trollish behavior and incivility be eliminated? Andrew Stafford, author of “Who are these haters that poison the well of discourse?”, claims that if anonymity didn’t exist, the internet would look less like a playground “where the bullies always win” (Stafford, para.1): the bullies being the anonymous trolls that prowl in the needless comment section of articles. To back up his claim that anonymity fuels trolls Stafford states that anonymity “just allows people to indulge their worst tendencies, not only towards individuals but entire social groups” (Stafford, para.11). He is arguing that anonymity gives users a sense of invincibility to say and do what they please. If anonymity was erased from the internet entirely, the invincibility the trolls felt would be erased too. But as Jason Wilson, author of “Beware attempts to suppress conflict on the internet,” points out in Stafford’s argument, erasing anonymity would be taking a step back in democracy. To weaken Stafford’s argument Wilson states, “These views of incivility and political conflict make it possible to understand it as something which is essential to democracy, which ought to be seen in a broader perspective, and about which empirical questions can be asked” (Wilson, para.32).  Wilson is arguing that anonymity and the incivility that comes along with it opens up an understanding that is fundamental to our democratic society. Therefore, Stafford’s idea of eliminating anonymity would be taking away a certain perspective on the internet that is key to expanding our knowledge on incivility in our democracy. It is an interesting argument that anonymity and incivility should be seen as a positive aspect of our society, and it weakens Stafford’s argument and the idea of erasing anonymity greatly.

The elimination of anonymity would be a long, expensive, and controversial task. But would regulating anonymity make more sense? Clive Thompson, author of “Smarter Than You Think”, lays out the idea of regulating anonymity. Through the use of a descriptive, real world example, Thompson makes a clear and substantial argument that seems plausible in solving the trolling problem on the internet while being able to keep anonymity. He describes the works of Ta-Nahesi Coates who ran a personal blog that posted daily on topics that ranged from television shows to football to the civil war. One would think that his range of hot topic issues would lead to trolls taking over the comment sections, but as Thompson points out, it does not. Thompson explains about Coates strategy that, “The instant he [Coates] saw something abusive, he’d delete it, banning repeating offenders” (Thompson, para. 7). While eliminating the trollish behavior, Coates would also encourage the commenters who were expanding discussion to continually post. By regulating anonymous comments, people would still have the right to argue their views without having to expose their names. Because platforms such as Coates’ blog are seemingly small, it brings in the concern on how strategies, such as deleting troll’s comments, would work in a larger platform. Regulating comment sections without eliminating anonymity as a whole would be a grueling task for platforms such as YouTube and online newspapers that are too big to even have meaningful conversation. That leads to the argument of whether or not regulating anonymity is possible for the entire internet.

The last stance of the debate claims that anonymity should be kept the way it is because it is a right for internet users. Dana Boyd, a blogger and author of “’Real Names’ Policies Are an Abuse of Power”, relays the claim that anonymity must stick around because it provides safety for internet users. Boyd uses the real-life example of Google Plus which enforced a “real names” policy. There was a lot of pushback towards the policy, because users felt that their privacy and security were being infringed upon. Boyd uses examples such as, “I am a high school teacher, privacy is of the utmost importance,” and “As a former victim of stalking that impacted my family I’ve used [my nickname] online for about 7 years” to show the audience that there are internet users that deserve and need to be anonymous. She argues that the social aspect of the internet, such as Facebook, have a “so-called real names” policy, but in reality the social media website is filled with pseudonyms, and the amount of pseudonyms and nicknames on Facebook have not greatly affected the atmosphere of the website. Boyd believes that eliminating anonymity is not only an infringement on privacy rights but also “many people are far LESS safe when they are identifiable. And those who are least safe are often those who are most vulnerable” (Boyd, para.23). Getting jobs and being accepted into school programs are two risks of having “real names” policy, Boyd argues. Without having anonymity, people have the ability to judge you before they even meet you, and in our world, everyone believes everything they read on the internet. The weakness to Boyd’s argument is that full anonymity is considered a new concept to our society. Julie Zhuo, author of “Where Anonymity Breeds Contempt,” supports this idea by stating “until the age of the internet, anonymity was a rare thing. When someone spoke in public, his audience would naturally be able to see who was talking” (Zhuo, para. 9) Therefore if anonymity was not available in the past, the real question is whether or not anonymity is a privilege to our society or a right. Ultimately, Boyd’s argument is supported by the idea of safety. If anonymity was eliminated, the safety of internet users would be undermined.

Anonymity is a hot topic in our society, because technology has become an important aspect to our lives. My belief is that it is next to impossible to eliminate anonymity from the internet due to the fact that the cyber-world will never stop growing and people will always find a way to go around the system. Therefore, I think the stance of eliminating anonymity as a whole is weak. Regulating anonymity and keeping anonymity the same as it is now are the two arguments that contain good reasoning. The safety anonymity provides is important, but I believe trolling, hateful discourse, and incivility are associated with anonymity. The problem with the internet is people need to decide whether they value safety or less incivility more. I believe that if users want privacy and safety, then people need to be able to deal with the trollish behavior found throughout the Internet. Overall I think the argument that makes the most sense is that anonymity should be regulated in some way. In the end, there needs to be a “sweet spot” on how anonymity is regulated. Thompson was able to give a good example on how small platforms can delete troll’s comments, while expanding the discussion of intellectual commenters. Even though platforms such as YouTube may seem too big to regulate, if the company really wanted to solve the problem, there could be ways of going about it. Ultimately, I think there are ways that trolls and hateful discourse on the internet could be decreased and that takes regulating the use of anonymity.

 

 

Works Cited

Boyd, Dana. “Real-Names Are an Abuse of Power.” Communications of the ACM. August 4th,             2011.

Stafford, Andrew. “Who are these haters that poison the well of our discourse?” The Sydney     Morning Herald. April 12, 2012.

Thompson, Clive. “Smarter Than You Think.” Penguin Press. 2013. Pp 77-81.

Zhuo, Julie. “Where Anonymity Breeds Contempt.” New York Times. November 29, 2010.

Final Paper #3

Rough Draft Paper 3 04/06/16

Marli Overgard

RWS200

Prof. Werry

04/09/16

The Answers to Anonymity

Over the years the internet has become a breeding ground for vulgarity and bullying. Cyberspace has caused a subculture of internet trolls to be born. Trolls are online users that purposely start arguments and uproar on the internet with extraneous comments and off-putting messages. One example of trollish behavior is after Alexis Pilkington, a seventeen-year-old girl, committed suicide, trolls took over her tribute pages online and filled it with horrendous comments. The fact that no one knows who were posting the atrocious comments and references to hangings leads to the concern of anonymity. The debate with trolls and internet bullies aligns with the existence of anonymity on the internet. Since social media has become an essential to our culture, it is imperative that we examine the strengths and weaknesses of anonymity. Should the internet provide users the option of anonymity or not?  By looking at three different views of anonymity, it will be more apparent of whether or not anonymity on the internet should exist. The three different stances of anonymity are erase it, regulate it, or keep it how it is. I will analyze each stance by bringing in different texts that support the positions. In the end I will conclude which position makes the most plausible sense and has the better strengths in comparison to weaknesses.

Trolls lurk the internet with the privilege of having no name linked to their hateful discourse. If anonymity was no longer in existence, would trollish behavior be eliminated? Andrew Stafford, author of “Who are these haters that poison the well of discourse?” , claims that if anonymity didn’t exist, the comment section of the internet would be filled with intellectual conversation instead of hateful, useless comments. To back up his claim that anonymity fuels trolls Stafford states, that anonymity, “just allows people to indulge their worst tendencies, not only towards individuals but entire social groups.” He is arguing that anonymity gives users a sense of invincibility to say and do what they please. If anonymity was erased from the internet entirely, the invincibility the trolls felt would be erase too. Stafford argues that no one even bothers to look at the comment section on articles, therefore they should be eliminated in general if anonymity exists. What is interesting about this argument is that Stafford projects that if anonymity was eliminated, the comment sections would be purposeful and expand discussion. In contrary opinion, Jason Wilson fires back at Stafford’s article in “Beware attempts to suppress conflict on the internet,” by stating, “These views of incivility and political conflict make it possible to understand it a something which is essential to democracy, which out to be seen in a broader perspective, and about which empirical questions can be asked.” Wilson is arguing that anonymity and the incivility that comes along with it opens up an understanding that is fundamental to our democratic society. Therefore, Stafford’s idea of eliminating anonymity would be taking away a certain perspective on the internet that is key to expanding our knowledge on incivility in our democracy. It is an interesting argument that anonymity and incivility should be seen as a positive aspect of our society, and it weakens Stafford’s argument greatly.

The elimination of anonymity would be a long, expensive, fight-fueled task. But would regulating anonymity make more sense? Clive Thompson, author of “Smarter Than You Think”, lays out the idea of regulating anonymity. Through the use of a descriptive real world example, Thompson makes a clear and substantial argument that seems plausible in solving the trolling problem on the internet while being able to keep anonymity. He describes the works of Ta-Nahesi Coates who ran a personal blog that posted daily on topics that ranged from television shows to football to the civil war. One would think that his range of hot topic issues would lead to trolls lurking in the comment sections, but as Thompson points out, it does not. Thompson explains about Coates strategy that “The instant he saw something abusive, he’d delete it, banning repeating offenders.” While eliminating the trollish behavior, Coates would also encourage the commenters who were expanding discussion. By regulating anonymous comments, people would still have the right to argue their views without having to expose their names. Because platforms such as Coates’ blog are seemingly small, it brings in the concern on how strategies such as deleting troll’s comments would work in a larger platform. Regulating comment sections without eliminating anonymity as a whole would be a grueling task for platforms such as YouTube and online newspapers that are too big to even have meaningful conversation. That leads to the argument of whether or not regulating anonymity is possible for the entire internet.

The last stance of anonymity claims that it should be kept the way it is because it is a right for internet users. Dana Boyd, a blogger and author of “’Real Names’ Policies Are an Abuse of Power”, relays the claim that anonymity must stick around, because it provides safety for internet users. Boyd uses the real-life example of Google Plus which enforced a “real names” policy. There was a lot of pushback towards the policy, because users felt that their privacy and security were being infringed upon. Boyd uses examples such as, “I am a high school teacher, privacy is of the utmost importance,” and “As a former victim of stalking that impacted my family I’ve used [my nickname] online for about 7 years,” to show the audience that there are internet users that deserve and need to be anonymous. She argues that the social aspect of the internet, such as Facebook, have a “so-called real names” policy, but in reality the social media website is filled with pseudonyms. The amount of pseudonyms and nicknames on Facebook have not greatly affected the atmosphere of the website. Boyd believes that eliminating anonymity is not only an infringement on privacy rights but it also “many people are far LESS safe when they are identifiable. And those who are least safe are often those who are most vulnerable.” Getting jobs and being accepted into school programs are two risks of having “real names” policy, Boyd argues. Without having anonymity, people have the ability to judge you before they even meet you, and in our world everyone believes everything they read on the internet. Ultimately, Boyd’s argument is supported by the idea of safety. If anonymity was eliminated, the safety of internet users would be undermined.

My belief is that it is next to impossible to eliminate anonymity from the internet. Therefore, I think the stance of eliminating anonymity as a whole is weak. Regulating and keeping anonymity the same as it is now being two stances that contain good supporting evidence. The safety part of anonymity is important, but I also see a clear causation of anonymity and trolling. The problem with the internet is people need to decide whether they want safety more or less trollish behavior. I believe that if users want privacy and safety, then people need to be able to deal with the trollish behavior found throughout cyberspace. Overall I think the argument that makes the most sense is that anonymity is regulated. In the end, there needs to be a “sweet spot” on how anonymity is regulated. Thompson was able to give a good example on how small platforms can delete troll’s comments, while expanding the discussion of intellectual commenters. Even though platforms such as YouTube may seem too big to regulate, if the company really wanted to solve the problem, there could be ways of going about it. Ultimately, I think there are ways that trolls on the internet could be decreased and that takes regulating the use of anonymity.

Rough Draft Paper 3 04/06/16

Paper 3 Draft

Over the years the internet has become a breeding ground for vulgarity and bullying. Cyberspace has caused a subculture of internet trolls to be born. Trolls are online users that purposely starts arguments and uproar on the internet with extraneous comments and off-putting messages. One example of trollish behavior is after Alexis Pilkington, a seventeen-year-old girl committed suicide, trolls took over her tribute pages online and filled it with horrendous comments. The fact that no one knows who were posting the atrocious comments and references to hangings leads to the concern of anonymity. The debate with trolls and internet bullies aligns with the existence of anonymity on the internet. Should the internet provide users the option of anonymity or not?  By looking at three different views of anonymity, it will be more apparent of whether or not anonymity on the internet should exist. The three different stances of anonymity are erase it, regulate it, or keep it how it is. I will analyze each stance by bringing in different texts that support the positions. In the end I will conclude which position has the best supporting texts.

Trolls lurk the internet with the privilege of having no name linked to their hateful discourse. If anonymity was no longer in existence, would trollish behavior be eliminated? Andrew Stafford, writer for the Sydney Moring Herald, claims that if anonymity didn’t exist, the comment section of the internet would be filled with intellectual conversation instead of hateful, useless comments. To back up his claim that anonymity fuels trolls Stafford states, that anonymity, “just allows people to indulge their worst tendencies, not only towards individuals but entire social groups.” Stafford argues that no one even bothers to look at the comment section on articles, therefore they should be eliminated in general if anonymity exists. What is interesting about this argument is that Stafford projects that if anonymity was eliminated, the comment sections would be purposeful and expand discussion. He states his idea of a solution by saying, “I’d request genuine transparency of identity (why can’t names and addresses be withheld, where clearly necessary, on request?).”

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The elimination of anonymity would be a long, expensive, fight-fueled task. But would regulating anonymity make more sense? Julie Zhuo, New York Times author, lays out the idea of regulating anonymity. Through the use of real life examples Zhuo makes a clear and substantial argument that seems plausible in solving the trolling problem on the internet.

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The last stance of anonymity claims that it should be kept the way it is because it is a right for internet users. Dana Boyd, a blogger and author of “’Real Names’ Policies Are an Abuse of Power”, relays the claim that anonymity must stick around, because it provides safety for internet users. Boyd uses the real-life example of Google Plus which enforced a “real names” policy. There was a lot of pushback towards the policy, because users felt that their privacy and security were being infringed upon. Boyd uses examples such as, “I am a high school teacher, privacy is of the utmost importance,” and “As a former victim of stalking that impacted my family I’ve used [my nickname] online for about 7 years,” to show the audience that there are internet users that deserve and need to be anonymous. She argues that the social aspect of the internet, such as Facebook, have never enforced a real names policy, because it is not needed. The amount of pseudonyms and nicknames on Facebook have not greatly affected the atmosphere of the website. Boyd believes that eliminating anonymity is not only an infringement on privacy rights but it also “many people are far LESS safe when they are identifiable. And those who are least safe are often those who are most vulnerable.”

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My belief is that it is next to impossible to eliminate anonymity from the internet. Therefore, I think the stance of eliminating anonymity as a whole is weak. Regulating and keeping anonymity the same as it is now are two stances that contain good supporting evidence. The safety part of anonymity is important, but I also so a clear causation of anonymity and trolling. There needs to be a “sweet spot” on how anonymity is regulated. I think the argument that makes the most sense is that anonymity is regulated. I think there are ways that trolls on the internet could be decreased and that takes regulating the use of anonymity.

Paper 3 Draft

03/21/16

Stafford is claiming that if anonymity was taken away, the discourse on comment section in blogs would be less hateful. He mentions that female writers are at target for hateful comments and therefore that might lead to some of the best writers being driven out of the public eye. I agree that on blogs comments shouldn’t be anonymous because it leads to hateful and hurtful words. The comment section is supposed to enhance and debate the issues discussed in the post, not degrade writers and groups of people. There is no need for a comment section if all it does is hurt others. Discussion would be expanded if people had to own up to their identity.

 

Zhuo’s claims center around the problems and solutions of anonymity. She claims that anonymity is the driving force behind trollish behavior. She even backs up her claim by mentioning the online disinhibition effect which means people radically change when they are online and have anonymity. I agree with her claims, because you can see it all over the internet. Countless trolls lurk in every chatroom, YouTube comment section, and social media website. Some of the solutions she suggested were having an audition system for comments. The audition system would have a person monitor incoming comments and decide whether or not this person is a troll. Eventually, if the person sent in a certain amount of good comments, they would not be monitored anymore. Although that does sound like a decent way to eliminate trolls, I believe there are two distinct issues. One issue is that some blogs or websites do not have the means to hire someone who’s job is to monitor every comment that comes through their website. And secondly, someone could send in good comment until they are no longer monitored and then start trolling. Eliminating trolls from the internet almost seems impossible in my opinion and I believe if it can be done it would take a much more complex system.

 

Yik Yak Sows Hostility at Emory

 

This article doesn’t focus its claims that it is impossible to ban Yik Yak on a college campus, because people have their own data bases and they can go find different Wi-Fi. The author believes that instead of focusing on banning Yik Yak, the students should focus on how they treat each other. If they post with the thoughts of loving one another, Yik Yak could be a thing of fun and beauty. This author is neither for or against banning Yik Yak, because he/she knows that banning the app will not change anything. He/she believes that the way people decide to treat each other is more important.

 

Opinion: Yik Yak promotes hate speech and should be banned for LSU

 

Logan Anderson, a communication student at LSU, believes that Yik Yak should be banned from all college campuses. Anderson does acknowledge the right to freedom of speech, but he refutes that by stating that Yik Yak is a sea of hate speech. He is disgusted to read all of the sexist, racist, and hateful comments that fill up the app’s feed. Anderson doesn’t believe that the app itself is a problem, because negative comments can be down-voted and then deleted. But, because the students at LSU usually up-vote the hateful comments, Anderson sees the app as a determent to the campus.

 

Banning Yik Yak from College Campuses Is Counterproductive

 

Larry Magid, a technology journalist, takes that stance that banning Yik Yak would be counterproductive in the fight against hate speech. He is a free speech activist and thinks that college campuses are some of the most important places to have free speech. He thinks that Yik Yak is not the problem, because hate speech will always find a way to surface. Magid believes the best thing to do is counteract the hate speech with positivity. He backs up his claims by stating personal observations when he used Yik Yak. Magid mentions how be saw no blatant racist, sexist, or demeaning posts on the app. Magid ends his argument with stating that there may be a few negative voices roaming the internet, but there are millions of good voices that deserve to be heard.

03/21/16

Final Paper

Marli Overgard & Lauren Mitchell

RWS200

Prof. Werry

03 March 2016

Does Donald Trump Have the Disease of Demagoguery?

Demagoguery is often used by politicians to draw in their audience and persuade them into supporting their beliefs. While this tactic may seem convincing and seamless, the audience must be aware of hidden prejudices. One should fear demagoguery, because politicians use it in a manipulative way to rally their audience up and make them support their ideals. Patricia Roberts Miller, a rhetoric professor at the University of Texas, defines demagoguery as “polarizing propaganda that motivates members of an ingroup to hate and scapegoat some outgroup(s), largely by promising certainty, stability, and what Erich Fromm famously called ‘an escape from freedom’” (Roberts-Miller, para. 4). Roberts-Miller states that people can range from mild to severe demagogues depending on how many elements of demagoguery is found in their rhetoric. Demagoguery consists of elements such as polarization, victimization, demonization, and scapegoating. These elements will be expanded upon further in the paper. George Wallace, the governor of Alabama in 1963, was known as a true demagogue. During his inauguration speech, he displayed many elements of demagoguery as he was challenging the Federals Government’s push to end segregation. Wallace is considered the poster child of demagoguery and his tactics can be seen in current politics. People should fear demagoguery because it could be occurring in the 2016 Presidential campaign by candidate Donald Trump. In this paper, Trump’s speeches will be contrasted with Wallace’s inauguration speech to determine if Trump is a true demagogue.

Polarization is a common element of demagoguery used to create divisions in society. Roberts-Miller defines polarization as an element used to “divide a diverse range of things into two poles” (Roberts-Miller, para. 9). A demagogue separates these poles into the ingroup, which they are a part of, and the outgroup, which is seen as the evil group. Wallace uses the element of polarization to manipulate his audience into supporting his ideas. Wallace utilizes this element strongly in his speech to separate people with Southern ideals from those supporting the Federal Government. In the beginning of his speech, Wallace creates a clear division of people who support segregation and those who don’t by stating, “Let us rise to the call of freedom-loving blood that is in us and send our answer to the tyranny that clanks its chains upon the South” (Wallace, para.2). Wallace is characterizing the in-group as freedom-loving Southerners and putting desegregation supporters in the outgroup. Wallace uses an analogy stating “the tyranny that clanks its chains,” to imply the outgroup is evil. He is simply stating that the Federal Government is enslaving the in-group, because they have a “spirit of power thirst” (Wallace, para. 19). By doing so, Wallace creates a good versus evil atmosphere. He places an attractive label on the in-group making his audience more inclined to support its ideals. By comparing the government to a power hungry tyranny, Wallace creates a sense of fear in his audience because he knows they do not want to be associated with the ideas of evil people. Wallace uses polarization to his advantage to force his audience to choose one side.

Demonization and scapegoating are tools of demagoguery that places evil labels on the outgroup. Roberts-Miller defines demonization as “explicitly saying that the out-group is Satan himself or a tool of his, or through using metaphors that imply Satan and devils” (Roberts-Miller, para. 17). Wallace clearly uses demonization when describing the Federal Governments plans to desegregate the nation by stating, “It is a system that is very opposite of Christ for it feeds and encourages every degenerate…” (Wallace, para. 16). The opposite of Christ is simply the Antichrist known as Satan. Because the Southerners are extremely invested in their faith, they will not want to support an ungodly Government. Therefore, Wallace uses demonization to his advantage to create hatred in the Southerners’ hearts towards the Government. Scapegoating is another element of demagoguery Wallace uses to rally up the audience. As defined by Roberts-Miller, “a scapegoat is a person or group on whom one dumps all responsibility for a situation; that person or group is responsible for the bad situation of the ingroup” (Roberts-Miller, para. 22). Wallace scapegoats the Government by blaming them for attacking the Constitution and the beliefs of the founding fathers. He does this by stating, “the sane reasoning our founding fathers has long since been forgotten as the so-called ‘progressives’ tell us that our Constitution was written for ‘horse and buggy’ days…” (Wallace, para.16). Wallace blames the Government for wanting to change the framework of the Constitution and implies that they will destroy what the nation was built upon. Even though this speech promotes segregation, Wallace manages to never degrade the black community directly. By scapegoating the Government, Wallace strategically makes this an argument about the protection of Constitutional rights. By making his argument seem like he is simply trying to protect his country and not coming across as a racist, the audience views him as a good man with good intentions.  

Victimization is an element that demagogues rely heavily on. Roberts-Miller states it’s when “the ingroup is being victimized by the situation […] and the claim is that the ingroup has responded to this victimization with extraordinary patience and kindness” (Roberts-Miller, para. 24). The element of victimization is used by Wallace to place blame on others. Wallace brands Southerners as victims and makes them feel like desegregation would ruin their futures. By using victimization, Wallace appeals to the emotions of his Southern audience by making them fear desegregation. Wallace’s use of victimization is apparent when he says, “We can no longer hide our head in the sand and tell ourselves that the ideology of our free fathers is not being attacked and is not being threatened by another idea, for it is” (Wallace, para. 13). Wallace is implying that the in-group has been submissive to the Federal Government’s control for far too long and it is time that they stand up for what they believe in. By mentioning that the “ideology of our free fathers,” is being attacked, Wallace is implying that the values that Southerners have known all their lives are in danger. Here he is making Southerners out to be the victims of the Federal Government’s fight to desegregate the nation. This creates fear in the audience members because it makes them believe that the government is trying to change them and take over their lives. Wallace uses an example of control by stating, “It is the spirit of power thirst that led the same president to launch a full offensive of twenty-five thousand troops against a university, of all places, in his own country and against his own people” (Wallace, para. 19). By strategically using the phrases “attack” and “against his own people,” Wallace makes it seem as though the government is against the nation and therefore the ingroup is the victim of the attack. Wallace says this to show his audience that the government is not on their side.

Wallace displayed various elements of demagoguery in his speech during the civil rights era. As our nation has evolved, demagoguery is still used by politicians today. One politician who is labeled by some people as a demagogue is Republican presidential candidate Donald Trump. Trump has been perceived as a sexist, racist, and overall cruel man. Because of those descriptions, it has been questioned if Trump is a demagogue. But racism, sexism, and cruelty does not necessarily mean he is using demagoguery. We will analyze Trump’s rhetoric in contrast with Wallace’s use of demagoguery to help us come to the conclusion of whether or not Trump is a true demagogue.

Trump establishes in-groups and out-groups in the fight to become the leader of the nation. In December of 2015, Trump called for the shutdown of Muslims entering the United States. This is a clear example of polarization and creating in-groups and out-groups. Trump is making it seem as if all members of the Muslim community are a threat to the country and creates an “us vs. them” mentality. This establishes fear in Americans because they do not want “evil” people entering the nation. Trump not only does this with the Muslim community, but also with Mexicans. Trump places Mexicans in an outgroup by stating, “When Mexico sends its people, they’re not sending their best. They’re not sending you. They’re not sending you. They’re sending people that have lots of problems, and they’re bringing those problems with them. They’re bringing drugs. They’re bringing crime. They’re rapists” (Trump, para. 9). When Trump uses the phrase “they’re not sending you” he is implying that the ingroup, which are American citizens, is the better than Mexican immigrants. He also claims that immigrants from Mexico are dangerous to America, which establishes more fear in the audience. Trump is going as far as to create a physical barrier to keep the outgroup out of the country. The wall is a symbol of Trump’s distinct use of polarization. Like Wallace, Trump makes it clear to the audience who the ingroup and outgroup are. In regards to polarization, it can be determined that Trump exhibits strong symptoms of demagoguery.

Trump also displays uses of victimization and scapegoating when talking about the struggles of our nation. He states that America’s problems are due to out-groups and not Americans themselves. To display this, he states, “Until we are able to determine and understand this problem and the dangerous threat it poses, our country cannot be the victims of horrendous attacks by people that believe only in Jihad, and have no sense of reason or respect for human life.” Trump is generalizing a group of people and making it seems as though they are the source of all of America’s problems. Trump is blatantly stating that America has fallen victim to the Muslim religion. With ISIS being a prevalent threat to our country and the world, Trump is creating fear in Americans that all Muslims are related to ISIS and will bring terror to the country. Trump says this in order justify his policies against Muslims and not wanting them in the country. Because Trump established that Muslims were a part of the outgroup, he uses the element of scapegoating to place full blame on them for America’s growing problems. Roberts-Miller explains that scapegoating is effective because, “it takes a tremendously complicated situation, about which people are very anxious, and makes them feel better, by presenting a simple solution that anyone can grasp: elimination of the outgroup and promotion of the ingroup” (Roberts-Miller, para.18) This concept is precisely what Trump is endorsing by stating the best way to solve terrorism is to have a complete shutdown of Muslims entering the country. Through the use of victimization and scapegoating, both Trump and Wallace create a sense of pride in the ingroup, which makes their audiences more susceptible to their beliefs. Trump’s use of victimization and scapegoating are two more examples on how Trump exudes symptoms of demagoguery.

In comparison to Wallace, Trump lacks certain elements of demagoguery such as demonization. Although Trump tends to be offensive in his word choice towards the outgroup, he never labels them as a product of the Antichrist. Even though Trump has made it clear that he is against the Muslim culture, he never states that the people are ungodly. In fact, Trump rarely mentions God in his arguments which he strategically does to appeal to a greater amount of people. Therefore, unlike Wallace, Trump doesn’t use the element of demonization and has no symptoms of demagoguery in that regard.

After analyzing Trump’s speeches in contrast with Wallace’s use of demagoguery, it can be concluded that Trump conveys symptoms of a demagogue. Roberts-Miller states, “if one thinks of demagoguery as a disease, there are symptoms, and a person might have a mild or severe case of demagoguery” (Roberts-Miller, para.7). Therefore, even though Donald Trump lacks elements such as demonization, he strongly exudes other elements. If demagoguery was looked at as a scale ranging from a mild demagogue to a severe demagogue, we would conclude that Trump lies in the middle. As people continue to watch Trump’s speeches, it is important they are aware of his usage of demagoguery. Because demagoguery is manipulative and sometimes hidden to the average citizen, it becomes a dangerous and effective strategy. If people didn’t fall for Trump’s usage of demagoguery, maybe Americans would see through his empty policies and stop voting for him. Without Trump and his demagoguery ruling the country, we could actually keep America great like it has always been.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Works Cited

Donald Trump. “Presidential Announcement Speech.” Trump Towers. June 16, 2015.

Roberts-Miller, Patricia. “Democracy, Demagoguery, and Critical Rhetoric.” Rhetoric & Public Affairs 8.3 (2005): 459-76.

Final Paper

Rough Draft

Lauren Mitchell and Marli Overgard

RWS 200

Chris Werry

09 March 2016

Demagoguery in Politics

 

Demagoguery is often used by politicians to appeal to their audience emotions using prejudices. One should fear demagoguery, because politicians use it in a manipulative way to rally their audience up and make them support their ideals. Patricia Roberts Miller states that demagoguery consists of elements of polarization, victimization, demonization, and dehumanization. Henry Wallace, the governor of Alabama in 1963, was known as a true demagogue. During his inauguration speech, he displayed many elements of demagoguery as he was challenging the federals government’s push to end segregation. People should fear demagoguery because it could be occurring currently in the 2016 Presidential campaign by candidate, Donald Trump. In this paper, Trump’s speeches will be contrasted with Wallace’s inauguration speech to determine if Trump is a true demagogue.

Wallace uses the element of polarization to manipulate his audience and confer his ideas. Roberts-Miller explains that polarization is one of the most convincing qualities in demagoguery. It is the strategy of placing ideals in an out-group and an in-group. Wallace utilizes this element strongly in his speech to separate Southerners from those supporting the Federal Government. “Let us rise to the call of freedom-loving blood that is in us and send our answer to the tyranny that clanks its chains upon the South” (Wallace, para.2). Wallace is characterizing the in-group as freedom-loving Southerners and putting desegregation supporters in the outgroup. By doing so, Wallace is placing an attractive label on the in-group making his audience more inclined to join the in-group and support its ideals. By comparing the government to a tyranny, Wallace creates a sense of fear in his audience because he knows they do not want to be associated with the ideas of evil people.

Wallace is against desegregation and dehumanizes the African American community to convince his Southern audience that segregation is needed. Wallace uses dehumanization and belittles African Americans by stating, “We invite the negro citizens of Alabama to work with us from his separate racial station” (Wallace, para.26). He dehumanizes them by saying they need permission to work. By doing this, Wallace justifies segregation because it makes it seem as if African Americans’ feelings and livelihoods don’t matter as much as white southerners. “I shall fulfill my duty toward honesty and economy in our State government so that no man shall have a part of his livelihood cheated and no child shall have a bit of his future stolen away” (Wallace, para. 1). The livelihood and futures that Wallace is talking about is those of white people. By not acknowledging the the importance of the lives of African Americans he is dehumanizing them and making his audience feel no remorse for segregating them. This is a powerful tool because it eliminates the guilt that some audience members might have and justifies Wallace’s proposal of keeping segregation alive in America.

The element of victimization is used by Wallace to place blame on others. Wallace brands Southerners as victims and makes them feel like segregation would ruin their futures. By using victimization, Wallace appeals to the emotions of his Southern audience by making them fear segregation. Wallace’s use of victimization is apparent when he says, “We can no longer hide our head in the sand and tell ourselves that the ideology of our free fathers is not being attacked and is not being threatened by another idea, for it is” (Wallace, para. 13). Here he is making Southerners out to be victims of the federal government’s fight to desegregate the nation. Wallace is implying that the government is attacking the values that southerners have known all their lives. This creates fear in the audience members because it makes them believe that the government is trying to change them and take over their lives. “It is the spirit of power thirst that led the same president to launch a full offensive of twenty-five thousand troops against a university, of all places, in his own country and against his own people” (Wallace, para. 19). By strategically using the word “attack”, Wallace makes it seem as though the government is against the nation and therefore the white citizens are the victims of the attack. Wallace says this to show his audience that the government is not on their side.

Wallace displayed various elements of demagoguery in his speech during the civil rights era. As our nation has evolved, demagoguery is still used by politicians today. One politician who is labeled as a demagogue is republican presidential candidate Donald Trump. Trump has been perceived as a sexist, racist, and overall cruel man. Because of those descriptions, it has been questioned if Trump is a demagogue. But racism, sexism, and cruelty does not necessarily mean he is using demagoguery. We will analyze Trump’s rhetoric in contrast with Wallace’s use of demagoguery to help us come to the conclusion of whether or not Trump is a true demagogue.

Trump establishes in-groups and out-groups. In December of 2015, Trump called for the shutdown of Muslims entering the United States. This is a clear example of polarization and creating in-groups and out-groups. Trump is making it seem as if all members of the Muslim community are a threat to the country and creates an “us vs. them” mentality. This creates fear in Americans because they do not want “evil” people entering the nation. Trump not only does this with the Muslim community, but also with Mexicans. Trump places Mexicans in an out-group by stating, “When Mexico sends its people, they’re not sending their best. They’re not sending you. They’re not sending you. They’re sending people that have lots of problems, and they’re bringing those problems with us. They’re bringing drugs. They’re bringing crime. They’re rapists” (Trump). When Trump uses the phrase “they’re not sending you,” he is implying that the in-group, which are American citizens, is the better than Mexican immigrants. He also claims that immigrants from Mexico are dangerous to America, which establishes more fear in the audience. Trump and Wallace’s use of polarization is similar in that they are making certain groups of people seem like they are better than others.

Trump also displays uses of victimization when talking about the struggles of our nation. He states that America’s problems are due to out-groups and not Americans themselves. To display this, he states, “Until we are able to determine and understand this problem and the dangerous threat it poses, our country cannot be the victims of horrendous attacks by people that believe only in Jihad, and have no sense of reason or respect for human life.” Trump is generalizing a group of people and making it seems as though they are the source of all of America’s problems. Trump is blatantly stating that America has fallen victim to the Muslim religion. With ISIS being a prevalent threat to our country and the world, Trump is creating fear in American’s that all Muslim are related to ISIS and will bring terror to the country. Trump says this in order justify his policies against Muslims and not wanting them in the country.

There are elements of demagoguery used by both George Wallace and Donald Trump in their political speeches. Both use demagoguery to create fear in their audience in hope that people will support their ideas. It has been questioned whether Trump is a true demagogue and after analyzing his rhetoric, we believe that does display elements of demagoguery. It is important to not fall for the tactics used by these two demagogues and instead rationally consider their ideas.

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